Sunday, October 29, 2006

Play 329: I Wonder

CHARACTERS
1
2

1
When I see you—

2
I want to say something.

1
Even just say hi—

2
But you always look away—

1
Never meet my eyes—

2
I keep watching until you pass—

1
Just in case you look up.

2
But you never do.

1
But you never do.

(Beat.)

2
It’s been a while—

1
Since we talked.

2
Too long.

1
What happened?

1
What happened?

(Beat.)

1
I wonder sometimes.

2
We used to be close—

1
At least I think we did—

2
Or maybe I’m imagining it—

1
Maybe it’s always been this way.

2
Who knows.

1
I wonder if you feel the same—

2
If you ever think of me.

1
You probably don’t.

2
I doubt you do.

(Beat.)

1
Sometimes I wonder—

2
If things had gone slightly differently—

1
How close we might’ve been—

2
Even just a slight shift—

1
And it could all be different—

2
Because that’s how it works—

1
It’s all coincidences—

2
Relationships aren't any different—

1
No less random.

(Beat.)

2
Do you ever think of me?

1
Do you wonder too?

(Beat.)

1 AND 2
Who am I kidding?

(Blackout.)

4 Comments:

At 8:41 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

I like this one. Heart wrenching and completely relatable. The flow seems very natural.

All the lonely boys and girls should get together for one giant innocent sleepover filled with deep conversation, honesty, and maybe cuddling. ^_^

~alina

 
At 8:49 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

That's so bittersweet and melancholy. Very elegant.

 
At 8:00 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Ben...beautiful...made me even a little teary.

-Laura

 
At 11:04 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Actually...I didn't like this one. The message was carried out well through the style....but I didn't think it was very original...and nothing like your usual work. That's a subjective opinion, though...

 

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