Play 321: Intertwining Monologues
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Have you ever noticed—
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I’ve realized—
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How people never really listen?
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That no one really hears what anyone says.
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When other people talk—
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They act like they do.
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It’s just like pauses in a monologue—
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But they don’t really.
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Not an actual dialogue.
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They’re just waiting—
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Just multiple intertwined monologues.
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To talk again.
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Snaking around each other—
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Waiting in anticipation for each phrase to end—
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But never touching.
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So it’s their turn again.
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They may cross each other in time—
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All there is is people waiting for their turns.
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But that’s where the connection ends.
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No conversations.
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And that’s no real dialogue.
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No connection.
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No conversation.
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Monologues.
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Nothing more.
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Just waiting.
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Just waiting.
(Blackout.)

2 Comments:
That's around one of the most poetic scenes I've seen you write. Really beautiful, the pacing.
-Laura
The broken sentence structure reminds me a bit of David Mamet. That's definitely a good thing.
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